My mother is the most important person in my life.
학생이 쓴 원문
I respect my mother than any other person. My mother always sacrifices for her children's happiness, and I often think that it is too much. Also, my personality is influenced by my mother most. I'm not sure but, I want to be a good father like my mother in the future. This is why i think my mother is the most important person in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
WOW!^^
I am very impressed on how well you answered your homework!^^
It is truly amzing how mothers can do many things for the family especially for
their children.^^
I agree with you every word!^^
Make it a point to capitalize some of your words.^^
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I respect my mother than any other person.
>> I respect my mother the most than any other person.
My mother always sacrifices for her children\'s happiness, and I often think that it is too much.
>> CORRECT
OR> She mostly does things for her children which I think is a lot.
Also, my personality is influenced by my mother most.
>> CORRECT
OR> I got a lot of my personality after my mother.
I\'m not sure but, I want to be a good father like my mother in the future.
>> CORRECT
Or> If I will ba a parent in the future, I\'d like to be like my mother.
This is why i think my mother is the most important person in my life.
>> This is why I think my mother is the most important person in my life.
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