My mother is the most important person in my life.

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

I respect my mother than any other person. My mother always sacrifices for her children's happiness, and I often think that it is too much. Also, my personality is influenced by my mother most. I'm not sure but, I want to be a good father like my mother in the future. This is why i think my mother is the most important person in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ WOW!^^ I am very impressed on how well you answered your homework!^^ It is truly amzing how mothers can do many things for the family especially for their children.^^ I agree with you every word!^^ Make it a point to capitalize some of your words.^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I respect my mother than any other person. >> I respect my mother the most than any other person.  My mother always sacrifices for her children\'s happiness, and I often think that it is too much. >> CORRECT OR> She mostly does things for her children which I think is a lot.  Also, my personality is influenced by my mother most. >> CORRECT OR> I got a lot of my personality after my mother.  I\'m not sure but, I want to be a good father like my mother in the future. >> CORRECT Or> If I will ba a parent in the future, I\'d like to be like my mother.  This is why i think my mother is the most important person in my life. >> This is why I think my mother is the most important person in my life.

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