my motivation in Life
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Laura! Thank you for taking some time to do your homework. It is very nice to know your motivations in life. Let this be your reason to be better everyday. Please check the sentence corrections and recommendations I have noted here. Thank you very much!
1. when l see many people, there live really hard.
>>> I see many people who work hard for their living.
so, i try living for my life
>>> So I also try hard to make a living for myself.
2.my motivation in life is my happy
>>> My motivation in life is my happiness.
3. My motivation in life eat delicios foods.
>>> My motivation in life is eating delicious food.
4.My motivation in my life try new things
>>> My motivation in life is trying new things.
5.My motivation in life is my family.
>>> CORRECT!
-TEACHER MICHELLE-
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