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2018-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I like the book named 'The Human Jungle'(정글만리-original name) Have you heard about this book? This book is story of life in China. After I read this book, my mind was changed into positive of China. Before I read this book, I thought the China is bad country. I recommend it to you!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Ssun!

Please take note of the suggestions below.

Always make sure to review your lessons.

I\'ll talk to you soon!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I like the book named \'The Human Jungle\'(정글만리-original name)

>> I like the book entitled \'The Human Jungle.\'
Have you heard about this book?

>> Correct
This book is story of life in China.

>> The book is about life in China.
After I read this book, my mind was changed into positive of China.

>>  After I read this book, I saw China in a more positive light.
Before I read this book, I thought the China is bad country.

>>  Before I read this book, I thought that China was a bad country.
I recommend it to you!!

>> Correct

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