My neighborhood
학생이 쓴 원문
I live in an apartment with family in Hwaseong city.
My neighborhoods is safe in clean because I live in an apartment complex.
There are many restaurants, coffee shop, Jim center, markets, bus station and public office.
especially, I can go to the the convenience store fast as it is in front of my apartment.
but there is a little noisy and no subway stations near my neighborhood.
I often go to Jim center after worker which is near my house.
when I go there I attend dance class, use the fitness equipment ,spa and do sauna.
Overall, my neighborhood is a good place to live.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Julia,
Your neighborhood is very convenient.
thank you for sending me your homework. keep it up and kindly check those corrected part to make your sentence better :)
Have an awesome day!
Aki~
I live in an apartment with family in Hwaseong city.
>>> I live in an apartment with my family in Hwaseong City.
My neighborhoods is safe in clean because I live in an apartment complex.
>>> My neighborhood is safe and clean because I live in an apartment complex.
There are many restaurants, coffee shop, Jim center, markets, bus station and public office.
>>> There are many restaurants, coffee shops, gym centers, markets, bus stations, and public offices.
especially, I can go to the the convenience store fast as it is in front of my apartment.
>>> So it is very easy for me to go to eh convenience as it is in front of my apartment.
but there is a little noisy and no subway stations near my neighborhood.
>>> But it is a little noisy and there aren\'t any subway stations near my neighborhood.
I often go to Jim center after worker which is near my house.
>>> After work, I often go to the gym which is near my house.
when I go there I attend a dance class, use the fitness equipment, spa and do sauna.
>>> CORRECT!
Overall, my neighborhood is a good place to live in.
>>> CORRECT!
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