My neighborhood
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It\'s really nice to live in a neighborhood where friendly people live.
You are lucky to have your friendly neighbors.
Anyway, thanks for writing this. I will see you on Wednesday.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I live in a company house of my husband so my husband knows most of the residents.
>>> OR: I live in a house provided by my husband\'s company so my husband knows most of the residents.
It sometimes can be good or bad.
>>> It sometimes good and sometimes bad.
>>> OR: It has some advantages and disadvantages.
The good thing is that we can get some fresh ingredients for food from neighbors.
>>> The good thing is that we can get some fresh ingredients for food from our neighbors.
Since a college of my husband lives next door, whenever he gets enough ingredients from somewhere, he share them with us.
>>> Since my husband\'s classmate in college lives next door, whenever he gets enough ingredients from somewhere, he shares them with us.
On the other hand, the bad thing is that I have to dress up even though I go grocery shopping to the supermarket in front of my house because it is easy to meet people who know my husband by chance.
>>> OR: On the other hand, the bad thing is that I have to dress up even though I go grocery shopping to the supermarket in front of my house because the chance to meet people who know my husband is high.
Although it occasionally makes me annoyed, it is fine because the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.
>>> Correct!
My husband and I have a friendly neighbor who is also the one of my husband\'s coworker having a wife, two kids and a dog.
>>> My husband and I have a friendly neighbor who is also one of my husband\'s coworker. He has a wife, two kids and a dog.
We are so close that we help each other when we are in need.
>>> Correct!
For example, everytime the family goes for a summer vacation, we keep their dog instead of them.
>>> For example, every time the family goes for a summer vacation, we take care of the dog for them.
It is good for me, too because I love animals so I like to spend time with their dog named Choco.
>>> Correct!
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