My Neighborhood

2011-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tess

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I live in a residential area called kang-dong gu It is east of seoul. It takes about 30 minutes to get to the downtown by subway. There are many restaurants such as VIPS, OUTBACK. There is also a big supermarket called EMART and HOMEPLUS. It's always noisy because of so many people , but it's very convenient to livehere. I can get anything I need even late at night. Also hanriver is near my house so I usually go to excercise with my friends. There are many people who exercise. Another great think about is that our neighborhood is near many mountains, freshair as we want and also go hiking anything please.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss. [Name]! Thank you for this composition. I really think you are very lucky to live in such a great place. It's nice to enjoy the beauty of nature. I wish to come and visit this place someday. Teacher Tess   I live in a residential area called kang-dong gu>>I live in a residential area called Kang-dong gu. It is east of seoul. >>It is located east of seoul. It takes about 30 minutes to get to the downtown by subway. >>correct There are many restaurants such as VIPS, OUTBACK. >>There are many restaurants such as VIPS and OUTBACK.There is also a big supermarket called EMART and HOMEPLUS. >>There are also   big supermarkets called EMART and HOMEPLUS.It's always noisy because of so many people , but it's very convenient to livehere. >> It's always noisy because of so many people , but it's very convenient to live here. I can get anything I need even late at night. >>correctAlso hanriver is near my house so I usually go to excercise with my friends. >>Han river is also near my house so I usually go there to excercise with my friends. There are many people who exercise. >>correctAnother great think about is that our neighborhood is near many mountains, freshair as we want and also go hiking anything please. >>Another great thing about  our neighborhood is that it is near many mountains with fresh air  and we can also go hiking . 

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