My neighborhood in the past
학생이 쓴 원문
I live in Kimpo now but when I was young, i lived in Seoul.
It was different. I could hang out with my friends easily and spend a lot of time, because we lived near each other.
It seemed that my friends were neighbors. however, we live separately now, so it is difficult to see them very often.
Somtimes I meet the friends and talk about our previous time.
We miss it and wish we lived closer.
I hope we get back to the time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I guess this would be your last composition for me.
I would really love to continue studying OPIC with you but since you have your own reasons I still hope to speak with you in the future.
Good luck and God bless on your OPIC test this Sunday.
Talk to you later.
-Tiny^0^
I live in Kimpo now but when I was young, i lived in Seoul.
>>(capitalize "i")
>>CORRECTIt was different.
>>CORRECT
I could hang out with my friends easily and spend a lot of time, because we lived near each other.
>>CORRECTIt seemed that my friends were neighbors.
>> It seemed that my friends were my neighbors.
however, we live separately now, so it is difficult to see them very often.
>>(capitalize "however")
>>CORRECTSomtimes I meet the friends and talk about our previous time.
>> spelling check: sometimes
>> Sometimes I meet them and talk about our previous time.
>> Sometimes I meet my friends and talk about our previous time.
We miss it and wish we lived closer.
>>CORRECTI hope we get back to the time.
>> I hope we get back to that time.
>> (or) I hope we can turn back time.
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