my neighbors
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Hi [이름]le!
These are my corrections. Your sentences were comprehensible but I think you need to practice writing using correct capitalizations and punctuations. Some of the words were also misspelled so I also corrected them. See you later!
-Kristel
my neighbors are very kind people so my family get along with them but recently i have a busy schedules i rarely have a chance to see my neighbors
>> My neighbors are very kind people so my family gets along with them well. I have a busy schedule recently so I rarely have the chance to see my neighbors.
however when i met them. i often talk about their daily life, garbage separation and niegborhood rumor with them
>> However, when I meet them, I often talk about their daily lives, rumors in the neighborhood and other topics such as garbage separation.
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i had interesting time with my neighbors last winter
>> I had an interesting time with my neighbors last winter.
heavy snow fell in my village so my family and neighbors shoveled the snow from front of my house to roadside
>> Heavy snow fell in my village so my family and neighbors had to shovel the snow from the front of our houses to the roadside.
we could finish the work easily because of helping one another
>> We finished the work easily because of helping one another.
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i like next-door neighor because she always help my family whenever we have complicated trouble and cares about others
>> I like my next door neighbor because she always help my family whenever we have complicated troubles. I like her because she also cares about other people.
i think many people also like her
>> I think many people also like her. / I think most of my neighbors like her.
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