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학생이 쓴 원문
I want to obtain some certificate, like OPIC, TOEIC Speaking and network management.
Because, It will help me opportunity in future.
So, I will study one by one, acheive my goal and catch a co[이름]g some opportunity.
But, I think if I make it mandatory to obtain a certificate, someday I feel a sense of skeptisism.
It\'s important to think positive, challenge, and not to be fraustrated.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
I hope your trip went well.
I\'m looking forward to your story.
See you later!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to obtain some certificate, like OPIC, TOEIC Speaking and network management.
>> I want to obtain some certificates, such as OPIC, TOEIC Speaking, and network management.
Because, It will help me opportunity in future.
Because, It will help me opportunity in future.
>> It\'s because they will help me gain opportunities in the future.
So, I will study one by one, acheive my goal and catch a co[이름]g some opportunity.
So, I will study one by one, acheive my goal and catch a co[이름]g some opportunity.
>> So, I will study one by one, achieve my goal, and seize upco[이름]g opportunities.
But, I think if I make it mandatory to obtain a certificate, someday I feel a sense of skeptisism.
But, I think if I make it mandatory to obtain a certificate, someday I feel a sense of skeptisism.
>> However, I think that if I make obtaining a certificate mandatory, I might someday feel a sense of skepticism.
It\'s important to think positive, challenge, and not to be fraustrated.
It\'s important to think positive, challenge, and not to be fraustrated.
>> It’s important to think positive, take on challenges, and not get frustrated.
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