My new baseball glove
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I bought a new baseballglove.
>> I bought a new baseball glove.
It is really expensive but good.
>> Correct
The company brand is from Japan but it was made in China.
>> Correct
The color the glove is black,red, and white. I like the color of the glove.
>> The color of the glove I sblack, red and white. I like it.
My previous glove was too small to play because I am outfilder. And this glove is for outfielder.
>> My previous glove was already too small for me to use because I am an outfielder. And this glove is for an outfielder.
And I play baseball using left hand. So, my glove is for leftie.
>> I play baseball with left hand, so, my glove is for leftie.
I want to play baseball now.
>> Correct
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