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My friend is a IT company a vice-president. He requested me help him.
The reason was a technical problem. His company has been doing special project .
but It got a ploblem at technical. The ploblem has not solved for 4 months.
so His customer was a upset. My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me.
I met his customer yesterday.
and I met some project member before metting customer.
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
Anyway I had to convince customer. I succeed and my customer was safisfied.
but I had a big problem and homework.
The problem was a lot and various kinds.
My customer has not enough time.
He want to finish this problem until this month.
but I had another schedule.
I am very busy with my schedual right now.
I will be more busy with schedual added.
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Thank you for this Sir [이름].
My friend is a IT company a vice-president.
>>> My friend is an IT company vice-president.
He requested me help him.
>>> He requested for my help.
The reason was a technical problem.
>>> correct
His company has been doing special project .
>>> His company has been doing a special project.
but It got a ploblem at technical.
>>> But it has some stechnical problem.
The ploblem has not solved for 4 months. so His customer was a upset.
>>> The problem has not been solved for 4 months so his customer was upset.
My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me.
>>> My friend asked me to solve it and the problem is not difficult for me.
I met his customer yesterday.
I met his customer yesterday.
>>> correct
and I met some project member before metting customer.
and I met some project member before metting customer.
>>> And I met some project members before meeting the customer.
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
>>> I asked the condition of the project and I found the problem.
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
>>> I though maybe the project manager did not report all the problem.
Anyway I had to convince customer.
Anyway I had to convince customer.
>>> Anyway, I had to convince the customer.
I succeed and my customer was safisfied.
>>> I succeeded and my customer was satisfied.
but I had a big problem and homework.
but I had a big problem and homework.
>>> But I had a big problem and homework to do.
The problem was a lot and various kinds.
>>> There were various problems.
My customer has not enough time.
My customer has not enough time.
>>> My customer does not have enough time.
He want to finish this problem until this month. but I had another schedule.
>>> He wants to finish this problem by the end of this month but I have a lot of other schedules.
I am very busy with my schedual right now.
>>> I am very busy with my schedule right now.
I will be more busy with schedual added.
>>> I will be more busy with schedule added.
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