my new custmer

2021-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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My friend is a IT company a vice-president. He requested me help him. The reason was a technical problem. His company has been doing special project . but It got a ploblem at technical. The ploblem has not solved for 4 months. so His customer was a upset. My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me. I met his customer yesterday. and I met some project member before metting customer. I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem. I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem . Anyway I had to convince customer. I succeed and my customer was safisfied. but I had a big problem and homework. The problem was a lot and various kinds. My customer has not enough time. He want to finish this problem until this month. but I had another schedule. I am very busy with my schedual right now. I will be more busy with schedual added.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Sir [이름].

My friend is a IT company a vice-president. 
>>>  My friend is an IT company vice-president.  
He requested me help him.
>>>  He requested for my help.  
The reason was a technical problem. 
>>> correct   
His company has been doing special project .
>>>  His company has been doing a special project.  
but It got a ploblem at technical. 
>>> But it has some stechnical problem.    
The ploblem has not solved for 4 months. so His customer was a upset. 
>>>  The problem has not been solved for 4 months so his customer was upset.    
My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me.
>>>  My friend asked me to solve it and the problem is not difficult for me.  
I met his customer yesterday.
>>>  correct  
and I met some project member before metting customer.
>>> And I met some project members before meeting the customer.    
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
>>> I asked the condition of the project and I found the problem.  
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
>>> I though maybe the project manager did not report all the problem.  
Anyway I had to convince customer. 
>>> Anyway, I had to convince the customer.     
I succeed and my customer was safisfied.
>>> I succeeded and my customer was satisfied.   
but I had a big problem and homework.
>>> But I had a big problem and homework to do.   
The problem was a lot and various kinds.
>>> There were various problems.    
My customer has not enough time.
>>>  My customer does not have enough time.  
He want to finish this problem until this month. but I had another schedule.
>>> He wants to finish this problem by the end of this month but I have a lot of other schedules.
I am very busy with my schedual right now.
>>> I am very busy with my schedule right now.   
I will be more busy with schedual added.
>>>  I will be more busy with schedule added. 

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