My New Hobby
학생이 쓴 원문
I am thinking about start nail art these days.
Because, I like to watch nail videos when I rest.
I was getting interested.
So, I want to try nail art for hobby during vacation.
If I try it, I would do white color nails at first.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Well done on submitting your homework! Here are the corrections; I hope it helps.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
>>> I am thinking about starting nail art these days.
Because, I like to watch nail videos when I rest.
Because, I like to watch nail videos when I rest.
>>> Because I like to watch nail videos when I rest.
I was getting interested.
I was getting interested.
>>> I am getting interested.
So, I want to try nail art for hobby during vacation.
So, I want to try nail art for hobby during vacation.
>>> So, I want to try nail art as a hobby during vacation.
If I try it, I would do white color nails at first.
>>> If I try it, I would paint white color nails at first.
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