My new house has a good view.

2010-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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My new house has a good view. There is a mountain behind our apartment. I can see that mountain in my living room. In winter, that mountain is covered with snows. In spring, it is covered with flowers. In summer, it is covered with green leaves. In autumn, it is covered with colored leaves. In last summer, I bought my new house for 50 million won. I became a moneylender because of it.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!   Wow, I love the view of your new house.. I always liked to have my own house with a good view of nature.. It's relaxing and it makes me feel comfortable.. So you are a moneylender? I didn't know that about you..^^ Anyway, good luck in finding a buyer for your old house so you can move to the new one..   T. Shy   In winter, that mountain is covered with snows.> > In winter, that mountain is covered with snow. In last summer, I bought my new house for 50 million won. >> Last summer, I bought my new house for 50 million won.

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