My new product
학생이 쓴 원문
I made a new product. It is still prototype. But I heard happy news.
The salesperson called me last week. He told some project need my solution. The project was a samsung semiconductor.
I knew Assigned engineer of the project .
He asked my product function. I had a new idea.
so It entered my mind new business.
I am going to the my company today.
I will analysis new function. and make new product.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this. Good luck with that then and hope things pan out well.
- T. Beth
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I made a new product. >>> correct
It is still prototype. But I heard happy news.
>>> It is still a prototype, but I\'ve heard happy news.
The salesperson called me last week.
The salesperson called me last week.
>>> correct
He told some project need my solution.
>>> He told some projects need my solution.
The project was a samsung semiconductor.
>>> The project was for a Samsung semiconductor.
I knew Assigned engineer of the project .
>>> I know the assigned engineer for the project.
He asked my product function.
He asked my product function.
>>> He asked for my product functions.
I had a new idea.
>>> correct
so It entered my mind new business.
so It entered my mind new business.
>>> So a new business entered my mind.
>>> OR: So I thought of a new business.
I am going to the my company today.
I am going to the my company today.
>>> I am going to my company today.
I will analysis new function. and make new product.
>>> I will analyze the new function and make a new product.
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