my new product

2021-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I tested my new product. I succeed in my company. but I didn\'t succeed in skhynix . The reason was transaction different. There are large transaction in skhynix. The meaning of transaction was message exchanged between computer . but I knew the reason. and enginner understood that. He will fix that. I will test next day. The product is new . It is not in korea. so I expect new business.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this.

- T. Beth
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I tested my new product.

>>> correct

I succeed in my company. but I didn\'t succeed in skhynix .

>>> I succeeded in my company but not in SKHynix.
The reason was transaction different.

>>> The reason was the transaction are different.

>>> OR: The reason was the difference in transaction.

There are large transaction in skhynix.

>>> There are large transactions in SKHynix.

The meaning of transaction was message exchanged between computer. but I knew the reason. and enginner understood that.

>>> The meaning of transaction in the exchanged message between computers. I knew the reason and the engineer understood that.

He will fix that.

>>> correct

I will test next day.

>>> I will test it the next day.
The product is new .

>>> correct

It is not in korea.

>>> Not in Korea though.
so I expect new business.

>>> So I am expecting a new business.

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