My new product
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I have tested my new product for this month.
It was good result at first . but it was bad at SKHynix.
The issue was performance.
so I and engineer changed program. but performance was not enogh.
It was normally a good performance.
I have worked huge site skhynix, samsung and big bank. so I had always this issue . But this time was very hard. My engineer was freelancer . besides He was a part-time job. so I have a headache.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]. Good luck with that. I hope you resolve it soon.
- T. Beth
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I have tested my new product for this month.>>> correct
It was good result at first . but it was bad at SKHynix.
It was good result at first . but it was bad at SKHynix.
>>> It had a good result at first, but it was bad at SKHynix.
The issue was performance.
>>> correct
>>> OR: The issue was related to its performance.
so I and engineer changed program. but performance was not enogh.
so I and engineer changed program. but performance was not enogh.
>>> So an engineer and I changed the program but the performance was not enough.
It was normally a good performance.
>>> correct
I have worked huge site skhynix, samsung and big bank.
I have worked huge site skhynix, samsung and big bank.
>>> I have worked in huge sites like skhynix, samsung and big banks.
so I had always this issue .
>>> I always had this issue.
But this time was very hard.
>>> correct
My engineer was freelancer .
>>> My engineer was a freelancer.
besides He was a part-time job.
>>> In addition, he was just a part-timer.
so I have a headache.
>>> so it is giving me a headache.
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