My new project

2021-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I completed a new product this week. but this product was test version and only had a main function. I succeed to test in my company . so I asked my customer in skhynix. He said ok. I processed that yesterday. I was succeed. My solution name was \"Drimsys kafka connector\". It was temporary name. Buy the way my customer was confused other product names. He proporsed other name. It was \"Drimsys kafka sink for striim\". I was upset. because striim . Striim was big problem solution. I said about bad engineer. He always said lie. I supposed this situation was occused samsung project. They would say \"Striim was out in the project\"

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this. Enjoy your weekend!

- T. Beth

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I completed a new product this week. but this product was test version and only had a main function.

>>> I completed a new product this week, but this product was a test version and only had a main function.

I succeed to test in my company . so I asked my customer in skhynix. He said ok.

>>> I succeed to test it in my company so I asked my customer in SKHynix about it and he said okay.

I processed that yesterday. I was succeed.

>>> I processed that yesterday and I succeeded.
My solution name was \"Drimsys kafka connector\".

>>> OR: My solution was called \"Drimsys kafka connector\".

It was temporary name. Buy the way my customer was confused other product names.

>>> It was a temporary name. By the way, my customer was confused with another product\'s name.

>>> OR: It was a temporary name. By the way, my customer had is confused with another product\'s name.
He proporsed other name. It was \"Drimsys kafka sink for striim\".

>>> He proposed another name. It was \"Drimsys kafka sink for striim\".

I was upset. because striim .

>>> I was upset because of Striim.

Striim was big problem solution.

>>> Striim had a big problem solution.

I said about bad engineer.

>>> I talked about a bad engineer.

He always said lie.

>>> He always lied.
I supposed this situation was occused samsung project. They would say \"Striim was out in the project\"

>>> I guess if this situation happened in Samsung project, they would say Striim should be out from the project.

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