My New School

2013-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I've enjoyed doing nothing these past couple of days. But my winter break is almost over. I have to get ready to go back to school. The new semester begins tomorrow. I'm very nervous. I have a lot of worries going through my head. What if I don't like my teacher? What if I don't make any new friends? I'm an outgoing person, but I worry about these problems. I want to make a good first impression.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Well, I can say that you really worry a lot. Don\'t be nervous and just be yourself. Everything will go well. Be positive and always look at the brighter side of things. Moreover, if you want to make new friends, be sure that you are also prepared to be a friend to anyone. Smile and be happy! T. JanE ^^ I\'ve enjoyed doing nothing these past couple of days. >> Correct But my winter break is almost over.>> Correct I have to get ready to go back to school.>> Correct >> I have to be ready for school.The new semester begins tomorrow.>> Correct I\'m very nervous.>> Correct I have a lot of worries going through my head.>> Correct What if I don\'t like my teacher?>> Correct What if I don\'t make any new friends?>> Correct I\'m an outgoing person, but I worry about these problems.>> Correct I want to make a good first impression. >> Correct

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