My new shoes
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening.
You better earn your allowance so that you would be
able to buy the shoes that you desire for your mother.
And by the way, I think the person that you were pertaining is McDonalds, am I right?
hehe.
I would like to know the answer. Please tell me in our class.hehe
See you and take care. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
I bought a new shoes last Saturday.
>> I bought new shoes last Saturday.
It looks good and it is very expensive.
>> It looks good but it is very expensive.
This style is great.
>> The style is great.
It looks like Samsunng Lion\'s baseball shoes.
>> Correct
I bought at the Lotte World Fila shop.
>> Correct
The shoe is 225 cm.
>> Correct
It is very bigger than my foot.
>> It is bigger than the size of my foot.
The color of my shoes is blue and white.
>> The colors of my shoes are blue and white.
The shoes are very expensive that I can\'t say buy something to my mother.
>> The shoes are very expensive that I can\'t afford to buy it for my mother.
Today\'s quiz
1.Someone is a man.
>> This person is a man.
2.Someone is a fat guy.
>> This person is a fat guy.
3.Someone is taller than you.
>> This person is taller than you.
4.Someone who has big face.
>> This person has a big face.
5.Someone who likes eating pizza and chicken and so on.
>> This person likes eating pizza, chicken and so on.
6.Someone who likes to joking.
>> This person likes to joke.
7.Someone is came to my house today.
>> This person came in to my house today.
8.Someone looks like white face hulk.
>> This person looks like a white-faced hulk.
9.Someone name is fat _ _ _ _ _.
>> This person has a name of fat_ _ _ _ _.
10. Someone job I English teacher.
>> This person is an English teacher.
Please guess who is. It will be easy.
>> Please guess who this person is. It is very easy.
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