My new shoes

2016-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I bought a new shoes last Saturday.It looks good and it is very expensive.This style is great.It looks like Samsunng Lion's baseball shoes.I bought at the LotteWorld Fila shop.The shoe is 225cm.It is very bigger than my foot.The color of my shoes is blue and white.The shoes are very expensive that I can't say buy something to my mother. Today's quiz 1.Someone is a man. 2.Someone is a fat guy. 3.Someone is taller than you. 4.Someone who has big face. 5.Someone who likes eating pizza and chicken and so on. 6.Someone who likes to joking. 7.Someone is came to my house today. 8.Someone looks like white face hulk. 9.Someone name is fat _ _ _ _ _. 10.Someone who's job is English teacher. Guess who is he? 1.Pancake 2.Mcdonald 3.Lotteria 4.DunkinDonaut 5.Pizzahut 6.Mr.Pizza 7.Pig 8.Chrispy Chicken 9.Baskin Rabbince 10.Fat David Please guess who is? It will be very easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening.

You better earn your allowance so that you would be

able to buy the shoes that you desire for your mother.

And by the way, I think the person that you were pertaining is McDonalds, am I right?

hehe.

I would like to know the answer. Please tell me in our class.hehe

See you and take care. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


I bought a new shoes last Saturday.

>> I bought new shoes last Saturday.

It looks good and it is very expensive.

>> It looks good but it is very expensive.

This style is great.

>> The style is great.

It looks like Samsunng Lion\'s baseball shoes.

>> Correct

I bought at the Lotte World Fila shop.

>> Correct

The shoe is 225 cm.

>> Correct

It is very bigger than my foot.

>> It is bigger than the size of my foot.

The color of my shoes is blue and white.

>> The colors of my shoes are blue and white.

The shoes are very expensive that I can\'t say buy something to my mother.

>> The shoes are very expensive that I can\'t afford to buy it for my mother.


 Today\'s quiz
1.
Someone is a man.

>> This person is a man.
 2.Someone is a fat guy.

>> This person is a fat guy.
 3.Someone is taller than you.

>> This person is taller than you.
 4.Someone who has big face.

>> This person has a big face.
 5.Someone who likes eating pizza and chicken and so on.

>> This person likes eating pizza, chicken and so on.
 6.Someone who likes to joking.

>> This person likes to joke.
 7.Someone is came to my house today.

>> This person came in to my house today.

 8.Someone looks like white face hulk.

>> This person looks like a white-faced hulk.
 9.Someone name is fat _ _ _ _ _.

>> This person has a name of fat_ _ _ _ _.
10. Someone job I English teacher.

>> This person is an English teacher.

Please guess who is. It will be easy.

>> Please guess who this person is. It is very easy.

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