My New Year^^{1/20}
학생이 쓴 원문
My best Seollal highlight is eating Rice Cake Supe.
This photo is rice cake supe picture.
In Korea, Koreans bilive that we eat rice cake supe, that person will grow a year older.
I bilive that, too!
The rice cake supe taste little salty and little aromatic.
I like that taste, too!
Now this Seollal, I am ten years old!
I\'m so~~~~~ excited!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. I\'ve tried this soup before, but I prefer it sweet!
Cheers!
Jean
My best Seollal highlight is eating Rice Cake Supe.
>> My best Seollal highlight is eating rice cake soup.
>> or: There are several highlights of my Seollal, but the best one is eating rice cake soup.
This photo is rice cake supe picture.
>> This is a photo of a rice cake soup.
In Korea, Koreans bilive that we eat rice cake supe, that person will grow a year older.
>> In Korea, Koreans believe that when we eat rice cake soup, we will grow a year older.
I bilive that, too!
>> I believe that, too!
The rice cake supe taste little salty and little aromatic.
>> The rice cake soup tastes a little salty and quite aromatic.
I like that taste, too!
>> correct
Now this Seollal, I am ten years old!
>> I am 10 years old this Seollal.
I\'m so~~~~~ excited!
>> correct
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