My New Year’s resolution
학생이 쓴 원문
I will save the money for trip and read lots of books for building up knowledge.
I will study hard in university and lose weight too.
I will want to live diligent and meaningful.
강사 첨삭
Good da, Jenna! Thank you for sharing about your New Year\'s Resolution. May all your dreams come true. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you, then!~ T. Lyn
I will save the money for trip and read lots of books for building up knowledge.
>>I will save a lot of money for my travel expenses as well as read a lot of books in order to build up my knowledge.
I will study hard in university and lose weight too.
I will study hard in university and lose weight too.
>>I will study hard in college and lose weight.
I will want to live diligent and meaningful.
I will want to live diligent and meaningful.
>>I want to live a diligent and meaningful life.
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