My next vacation

2010-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

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I will probably go to Singapore with my coworkers. I wanted to go to the country where I can use English there and isn't dangerous. Singapore is qulified for above conditions I am expecting to visit Singapore. Since I would ruin my trip due to too much shoppings, I will control my shopping and spend more time on sightseeing.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I hope you will have a great time in Singapore if your plan will push thru! Don't forget your camera.   I will probably go to Singapore with my coworkers.>>Correct!I wanted to go to the country where I can use English there and isn't dangerous.>>I want to go to a safe country where I can use my English skills.Singapore is qulified for above conditions >>Singapore is qualified in the conditions I mentioned.I am expecting to visit Singapore.>>Correct!Since I would ruin my trip due to too much shoppings,>>Correct!I will control my shopping and spend more time on sightseeing. >>Correct!

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