My older sister

*Homework Mother allow me to buy a puppy. Two companies have a contract on merger. Nowdays, cellular phone is necessity. Today I was prostrated by the heat. After I went to the market with older sister I took a nap, My older sister went to work. She is 2 years older than me. She is university student but now temporary absence from school. Her major is Chinese. She is good at Chinese. She is studing Chinese by phone, like me. Actually, I follow her. Thanks to the sister, I have met you.

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Hello Lindsay! Thank you for your message. Wow. You did very well on your homework. Great job! Your sentences were good as well뾷ou constructed them well. Keep it up!

I don뭪 like the hot weather too. Although here in Baguio, it뭩 generally much colder than any other place in the Philippines, I still find it irritating if it뭩 warmer than it뭩 supposed to be. >_< Drink a lot of water so that you don뭪 get dehydrated ok? Wow. I envy your sister. I want to learn Chinese but I think it뭩 very difficult. I think Korean is much easier.  Hehe. Anyway, have a great day ahead and take care! CIAO!

= T. Marie =

My older sister

>> correct

*Homework

>> correct
Mother allow me to buy a puppy.

>> My mother allowed me to buy a puppy.
Two companies have a contract on merger.

>> The two companies merged on a contract.
Nowdays, cellular phone is necessity.
>> Nowadays, cellular phone is a necessity.
Today I was prostrated by the heat.

>> Today I was frustrated by the heat.
After I went to the market with older sister I took a nap, My older sister went to work.

>> After going to the market with my older sister, I took a nap and she went to work.
She is 2 years older than me.

>> correct
She is university student but now temporary absence from school.

>> She is a University student but she is temporarily absent from school.
Her major is Chinese.

>> correct

She is good at Chinese.

>> correct
She is studing Chinese by phone, like me.

>> Like me, she is studying Chinese through phone.
Actually, I follow her.

>> Actually, I followed her.
Thanks to the sister, I have met you.

>> Thanks to my sister, I met you.