My opinion
학생이 쓴 원문
If my boyfriend cheat on me,I'll break up with him. Because you might tell me,he'll repeat his cheating.I also think like this,and I have some experiences that are my boyfriend cheated on me,for example,he told me other place which he stayed,he was busy because of many different reasons.So I was really disappointed.And I broke up with him after several days.Maybe through the forgiveness,he repeated his cheating, it was terrible memory.I had better refuse his apologies.And next time,I don't want to meet cheating man.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I’m so sorry to hear this experiences.
Well, that is a lesson learned for you.
So next time, you will know what to do.
See you tomorrow,
-- Connie --
If my boyfriend cheat on me,I'll break up with him.
>> If my boyfriend cheats on me, I’ll break up with him.
Because you might tell me,he'll repeat his cheating.
>> As you’ve told me, he might do it again.
>> As you’ve told me, he might do it repeatedly.
I also think like this,and I have some experiences that are my boyfriend cheated on me,
>> I agree with you because I had some experiences that my boyfriend had been cheating on me.
for example,he told me other place which he stayed,he was busy because of many different reasons.
>> For example, he told me that he is one place but in the contrary he was busy doing other things.
So I was really disappointed.And I broke up with him after several days.
>> SO I was really disappointed, so I broke up with him after several days.
aybe through the forgiveness,he repeated his cheating,
>> Maybe it’s because I forgave him one time, he cheated on me again.
it was terrible memory.I had better refuse his apologies.And next time,
>> It was a terrible memory, looking back I should’ve not accepted his apologies.
I don't want to meet cheating man.
>> I don’t want to meet a cheating man.
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