My opinion

2010-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I think friendship is different from love. Because love is confined with man and woman,and it is also possible to small group.But friendship is more wide relationship and more simple rather than love. I mean, the same sort of people are easy to become a friend, then,they begin to make a friendship.On the other hand,there are many reasons falling love, and once, they begin to love each other,they can share their differences. Because of this, they can be broke up. Perhaps, as these reasons, friendship is more happier than love to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Wow! What a meaningful article you have today. I like your point of view.   Connie I think friendship is different from love. >> I think the love for a friend is different from the love between opposite sex. Because love is confined with man and woman,and it is also possible to small group. >> Correct But friendship is more wide relationship and more simple rather than love. >> Friendship has a wider scope of relationship and it's simplier than that of love for the opposite sex. I mean, the same sort of people are easy to become a friend, then,they begin to make a friendship. >> I mean couple usually starts with friendship and it will soon be developed as the times goes by. On the other hand,there are many reasons falling love, and once, they begin to love each other,they can share their differences. >> On the other hand, there are many reasons for falling in love, and once they begin to love each other but they still have differences Because of this, they can be broke up. >> that causes their break up. Perhaps, as these reasons, friendship is more happier than love to me. >>Perhaps for these reasons, friendship is happier than love for the opposite sex for me.

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