My opinion
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live a leisurely life from now on because I have worked hard for 34 years.
I\'ll live doing things I haven\'t been able to do because I\'ve been busy.
Learning English, learning musical instruments, exercising, living abroad, etc.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Cecelia! Thanks for doing your homework.
That is right. You deserve to live a happy life after working hard.
See you later. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I want to live a leisurely life from now on because I have worked hard for 34 years.
>> CORRECT
I\'ll live doing things I haven\'t been able to do because I\'ve been busy.
>> CORRECT
Learning English, learning musical instruments, exercising, living abroad, etc.
>> I want to learn English, to play musical instruments, to exercise, to live abroad, etc.
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