My opinion about difference between old and current generation is economy
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think most different thing is thinking about food.
>>> I think, the most different thing is something related to foods.
You know, In 1950 there was Korean war.
>>> You know, in 1950 there was a Korean war.
After finish Korean war many of the Koreans struggled with food.
>>> After the war many Koreans struggled for food.
So US army or US government supports foods for Koreans.
>>> So the US army or the US government supported Koreans with foods.
Anyway I would like to say old generation was not rich to eat something enough.
>>> Anyway, I would like to say that the old generation was not rich to eat something enough.
But current situation in Korean have been changed significantly from the old generation.
>>> But the current situation in Korea has been changed significantly from the old generation.
Korea is strong for economy in the world.
>>> Korea is economically strong in the world.
Korea is belong to OECD, and as far as I Know Korea is around Top10 country for the economy.
>>> Korea belongs to the OECD, and as far as I know Korea belongs to the Top10 countries economically.
So current generation do not feel difficulty about the food and economy.
>>> So, the current generation doesn\'t not have difficulties about the foods supply and economy.
I think most different understanding different from old and current generation is coming from economy difference.
>>> I think, understanding the difference from old and current generation is coming from economic differences.
Sometimes old generation people said when I was young, something something, something.
>>> Sometimes old generation people, said when they were young, something something, something.
But current generation really hates that because they do not understand at all because economy situation is totally different.
>>> But current generation really hates that because they do not understand at all because economy situation is totally different.
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