my opinion about dream job is ..... may be.... ??? I don't know...

2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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dream job is what everyone hope to make a big money.. thanks for reading..

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Hi [이름]!

How\'s your day?

Thank you for doing your homework. Your answer is quite short, but thank you for giving your opinion.

You may want to expand your answer next time. It would be a good practice for you to share your thoughts.

Have a lovely night!

Amanda:)


\"In your opinion, what is the best job in the world?\" 


my opinion about dream job is ..... may be.... ??? I don\'t know...

>>There are many great jobs in the world. I find it hard to decide which one is the best.


dream job is what everyone hope to make a big money..

>> A dream job is what everyone hopes to make a big money off.

>> OR: Maybe, a dream job is something that could set you for life.

>> OR: A dream job is something financially rewarding.


 Thanks for reading.

>> Correct

>> OR: Thank you for reading.

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