my opinion about fortune telling (0510)
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About fortune telling I don't think it is useful or positive though other people enjoy it. It can be just fun but in that case it can be bad. First, when one listen to good news from it he or she will be excited. Anyway the real life is being. Another reason why I don't enjoy it is that I don't like it tell bad thing. Unrest and uncertain worry from it block the positive life energy!
People seem to enjoy something when they feel safe. Tellig directly about their life can give them stress little or much. Am I too much serious? Yes. I think that life is too short to waste doing meaningless.
Isn't the life full real wonder?
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T. Gracelyn
>>I don\'t think fortune telling is useful or positive though other people enjoy it.
It can be just fun but in that case it can be bad.
>>correct
First, when one listen to good news from it he or she will be excited.
>>For example, if one listens to good news, he or she will be excited.
Another reason why I don\'t enjoy it is that I don\'t like it tell bad thing.
>>Another reason why I don\'t enjoy it is that I don\'t like them to say bad things.
Unrest and uncertain worry from it block the positive life energy!
>>Giving them uncertain information blocks the positive energy.
People seem to enjoy something when they feel safe.
People seem to enjoy something when they feel safe.
>>correct
Tellig directly about their life can give them stress little or much.
>>Telling them about their life can give them much stress.
Am I too much serious? Yes.
>>correct
I think that life is too short to waste doing meaningless.
>>correct
Isn\'t the life full real wonder?
Isn\'t the life full real wonder?
>>Isn\'t life full of sunshine and rainbows?
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