My opinion about junk food

Hi, A-[이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinion on this matter. I agree with you on this! It is very important for us to be healthy so we can do and enjoy more things in life. Great job! See you very soon!
~ Teacher Marie

My opinion about junk food

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OR: Title: My Opinion On Junk Food
I think that quote is little bit right because we can do many things that we want when we are healthy.

>> I think that quote is a little bit right because we can do many things we want when we are healthy.

If we aren’t unhealthy, we can’t do anything we want.

>> If we are unhealthy, we can\'t do anything we want.

OR: If we aren\'t healthy, we can\'t do anything we want.

Almost people feel happy when they do something that they want.
>> Almost all people feel happy when they do something they want.

However, if you feel happy when you eat junk food, I think that it’s okay to eat it not very much.
>> However, if you feel happy when you eat junk food, I think it\'s okay to eat but not too much.

As a result, my opinion is that it’s okay to eat junk food if you want and feel happy, but don’t eat very much because it’s ruin your healthy.

>> Therefore, my opinion is that it\'s okay to eat junk if you want and feel happy about it but don\'t eat too much because it will ruin your health.