My opinion about SNS.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my case, I used to SNS as storage of my memory.
Getting age, order and order, I miss when I was young then now.
I think SNS is valuable diary for my life.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Brad!
Keep expressing yourself in English!
-Hanna ^^
In my case, I used to SNS as storage of my memory.
>>In my case, I used SNS as a storage of my memories.
Getting age, order and order, I miss when I was young then now.
>>As I age and become older, I miss the time when I was still young.
I think SNS is valuable diary for my life.
>>I think SNS is a valuable diary of my life.
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