My opinion about the friendship with the opposite sex.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it's very natual to have the opposite gender of friends for someone who lives on the earth. Because world population is always divided into two groups_women and men. So you need to be get along with both of them during the life time.
I regard the friendship between same group and different sex is little bit different. That's why people open say that "there's no friendship exists".
Both are one's feeling toward to another, so it's very difficult to fix the feeling. Sometimes, the friendship between man and woman can move to the next level_love. However,it doesn't always happen.
So I think "Love" is more powerful type of "friendship", and friendship is all around us.
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T.Faye
I think it\'s very natual to have the opposite gender of friends for someone who lives on the earth.
>>I think it\'s very natural to have friends with the opposite sex for someone who lives.
Because world population is always divided into two groups_women and men.
>>Because world\'s population is always divided into two groups, women and men.
So you need to be get along with both of them during the life time.
>>So you need to get along with them during our life.I regard the friendship between same group and different sex is little bit different.
>>Regarding the friendship between same sex and different sex, I think there is a bit difference.
That\'s why people open say that \"there\'s no friendship exists\".
>>That\'s why people often say \"there\'s no friendship that exists\".Both are one\'s feeling toward to another, so it\'s very difficult to fix the feeling.
>>Both sexes have a different feeling towards one another, so it is difficult to change the feeling.
Sometimes, the friendship between man and woman can move to the next level_love.
>>Correct
However,it doesn\'t always happen.
>>CorrectSo I think \"Love\" is more powerful type of \"friendship\", and friendship is all around us.
>>I think that Love is a more powerful type of friendship and friendship is all around us.
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