My opinion for selfish action
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: Answer these questions in 3-5 sentences. I will be more than happy to read your composition and correct the errors for you.
Do you consider yourself selfish in any way? How? What can you say about selfish people?
Answer : I try to be a not selfish person. Howenver, sometimes my selfish atitude comes out. For example, If I have an appointment with my friends or family, I left the office early even though my work was not completed yet. So, I don\'t want to point out who act selfish action.
I think that all people can be selfish person according to each person\'s situation.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. It\'s good to practice your writing and grammar skills by putting your thoughts into words. Keep it up!^_^
I try to be a not selfish person.
>>>I try not to be a selfish person.
Howenver, sometimes my selfish atitude comes out.
>>>However, sometimes my selfish attitude comes out.
For example, If I have an appointment with my friends or family, I left the office early even though my work was not completed yet.
>>>For example, if I have an appointment with my friends or family, I leave the office early even though my work is not yet complete.
So, I don\'t want to point out who act selfish action.
>>> So, I don\'t want to point out who acts a selfish action.
I think that all people can be selfish person according to each person\'s situation.
>>>I think that all people can be selfish depending on the situation.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.