My opinion of main causes of jealousy
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the main cause of jealousy is mind of envying someone.
I think mind of envying and jealousy someone is not good.
If someone happen good things, we could have to admit and ask them for friendly advices.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! They say mild jealousy can be healthy because it reiterates the fact that an individual cares about his or her partner, values them, and does not want to lose them. However, too much jealousy can be unhealthy. I\'ll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I think the main cause of jealousy is mind of envying someone.
>>I think the main cause of jealousy is the mind and heart of being jealous of someone.
I think mind of envying and jealousy someone is not good.
I think mind of envying and jealousy someone is not good.
>>I don\'t think it\'s good to envy or jealous of someone.
If someone happen good things, we could have to admit and ask them for friendly advices.
If someone happen good things, we could have to admit and ask them for friendly advices.
>>When something good happens to someone, you may need to acknowledge it and seek some kind advice.
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