My opinion of making a friend
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is hard to make friends.
In my case, I’m shy of strangers and hard to talk with them in first time.
Making a friend, I have a long time to know, talk and eat a person.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna, good day to you. Thank you for the effort especially in sending me your compositions earlier. I appreciate it a lot. I think making friends can be hard but just be who are. People love you the way you are. Take care! ~ T. Lyn
I think it is hard to make friends.
>>Correct. I find it difficult to make friends.
In my case, I’m shy of strangers and hard to talk with them in first time.
>>In my case, I am very shy with strangers and have a hard time talking to them at first.
Making a friend, I have a long time to know, talk and eat a person.
Making a friend, I have a long time to know, talk and eat a person.
>>Making friends and getting to know people take a long time.
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