My opinion of saying “possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever.”
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I’m agree with that. Possentions rot, rust and decay but compassion lasts forever. So we should help each other during a life. Don’t bite off more than we can chew and we have to protect people who are in a bad situation.
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I’m agree with that.
>> I agree with that.
Possentions rot, rust and decay but compassion lasts forever.
>> Possessions rot, rust and decay but compassion lasts forever.
So we should help each other during a life.
>> That\'s why we should help each other while we\'re alive.
Don’t bite off more than we can chew and we have to protect people who are in a bad situation.
>>CORRECT
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