My opinion of supplementary food
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two opinions on this question.
One of those is applicable to me and the other is applicable to everyone else.
Personally, I don\'t think I need to take extra vitamins or mineral supplements for my health, so I rarely eat these.
However, I agree that many people take them because many people have already taken them.
Hi Sharon^^ Good Wednesday!
I thought a lot about your last feedback.
\"Am I not following your expectations?\" And
\"Am I really bad at English?\" Or
\"I try hard to study English, but you\'re not satisfied?“
How do you think about my thought really?
강사 첨삭
H[이름]!
Good job!
You started out strong today.
Take note of the use of pronouns in this composition.
You can make the sentences simpler that way.^^
With regard to my feedback, it was referring to your own learning style.
You have to assess yourself every day and see if the methods are working.
If not, make a change or propose a change.
That\'s the way to be the best student that you can be.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are two opinions on this question.
>> Correct
One of those is applicable to me and the other is applicable to everyone else.
One of those is applicable to me and the other is applicable to everyone else.
>> Correct
Personally, I don\'t think I need to take extra vitamins or mineral supplements for my health, so I rarely eat these.
Personally, I don\'t think I need to take extra vitamins or mineral supplements for my health, so I rarely eat these.
>> Personally, I don\'t think I need to take extra vitamins or mineral supplements for my health, so I rarely take these.
However, I agree that many people take them because many people have already taken them.
However, I agree that many people take them because many people have already taken them.
>> However, I don\'t oppose to many people taking them because it has already become their habit.
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