My opinion on limited pay

2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I think employers should pay different payments depending on the employee\'s ability and effort. But If we will do this way, many people will only attract to high-paying places. Of course, this way has side effects but I think it will have more beneficial effects.

강사 첨삭

Well done again, Ms. [이름]!

Yes, employers should take considerations to their employees efficiency at work. Nonetheless, employees would seek for another job that could definitely give them satisfaction and most importantly self-worth. See you!

~Teacher Eunice

I think employers should pay different payments depending on the employee\'s ability and effort.
>>> Correct!
But If we will do this way, many people will only attract to high-paying places.
>>> But, if we will do this way, many people will be attracted to high-paying jobs.
Of course, this way has side effects but I think it will have more beneficial effects.

>>> Of course, this method has side effects, but I think this will have more beneficial effects.

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