My opinions about some gifts
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to give someone candles or perfumes.
Because when who he or she uses them, thinking of me!
2 years ago, I gave some pens my sister. She really liked them. So I gave other colors of pens for her. When I saw she loved them, feeling better on my own.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna. It\'s nice to know that you like to give gifts. It is okay to give anything, regardless of value. Remember, it is your thought that matters. I\'ll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I want to give someone candles or perfumes.
>>I want to gift someone a candle or perfume.
Because when who he or she uses them, thinking of me!
Because when who he or she uses them, thinking of me!
>>It is because when he or she uses them, they think about me.
2 years ago, I gave some pens my sister.
2 years ago, I gave some pens my sister.
>>Two years ago, I gave my younger sister some pens.
She really liked them.
>>Correct.
So I gave other colors of pens for her.
>>So, I gave her different colored pens.
When I saw she loved them, feeling better on my own.
>>When I saw her loving them, I felt so much better.
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