My opinions of unifying two Korea.

2010-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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Even in a tough situation economically, people don't want to spend a lot of effort or budget for the North. In my opinion, regardless of their nationlity or economic situation, we definately should help them since they are dying of hunger. I was shocked when I saw a girl who died of hunger. She ate grass on the fields or mountains and slept outside. But I'm also worried how to unify the whole countury since the economic gap is very severe and they have different economic system. So, it will be hard for them to adjust to totally new system and south Korea will go through confusion. In addtion, they are educated in a special way( how to be a good citizen for the North)I think we have a lot of differences in terms of culture or mind. That may be more problematic than economic gap is.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I can feel that you are sad about what is happening with North Korea. I hope that everything will end well. -RJ My opinions of unifying two Korea. >> My opinion about unifying the two Koreas. Even in a tough situation economically, people don't want to spend a lot of effort or budget for the North. >> Even in a crisis, people don’t want to spend a lot of money for North Korea.  In my opinion, regardless of their nationlity or economic situation, we definately should help them since they are dying of hunger. >> In my opinion, regardless of our nationality and the economic situation, we should still help them since they are dying of hunger.  I was shocked when I saw a girl who died of hunger. >> Correct She ate grass on the fields or mountains and slept outside. >> Correct But I'm also worried how to unify the whole countury since the economic gap is very severe and they have different economic system. >> But I am also worried about the unification of North and South Korea since the economy of the two is different. So, it will be hard for them to adjust to totally new system and south Korea will go through confusion. >> So people will be having a hard time to adjust. In addtion, they are educated in a special way( how to be a good citizen for the North)I think we have a lot of differences in terms of culture or mind. >> In addition, they were educated to be productive citizens in a communist society. I think we have a lot of differences in terms of culture and thinking. That may be more problematic than economic gap is. >> That may be a more complicated issue than economic difference.

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