My own Cafe
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had my own cafe,l would have lots of chances to meet various people. And it would be a hideout for my friends or acquaintances. Unlike running my own academy, I could have frequent breathers and I would feel freer.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree! This is like the ideal picture of owning a cafe. It sounds so nice to have friends over, and since it’s your cafe, you can stay there and hang out anytime without a time limit.
-T. Caitlyn
If I had my own cafe,l would have lots of chances to meet various people.
>> CORRECT
And it would be a hideout for my friends or acquaintances.
>> CORRECT
Unlike running my own academy, I could have frequent breathers and I would feel freer.
>> CORRECT
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