My own community game
학생이 쓴 원문
If I am able to creat my own community games then I would like to create games which are motivated at the game it already made before because some games which made in this way got very popular and also earn money.
For example I can choose Adventure of Reba which is motivated at Dungeon and Fighter.
This game is so popular that almost people who play D and F have played it.
Because of this reason I would like to create the game which is motivated at the game made it before.
강사 첨삭
Wow, Nicolas! Your smart! You could think of ideas like creating your own games. They say games are good for the mind as long as you know which games to play and how to play it responsibly. I am glad things like this inspires you. Have a goodnight! Sleep tight! ^^
T. Michelle ^^
If I am able to creat my own community games then I would like to create games which are motivated at the game it already made before because some games which made in this way got very popular and also earn money.
>>> If I am able to create my own game community, I would like to create that of which is inspired by previous games because some games made this way got very popular and earn a lot of money.
For example I can choose Adventure of Reba which is motivated at Dungeon and Fighter.
>>> For example, I can choose Adventure of Reba motivated by Dungeon and Fighter.
This game is so popular that almost people who play D and F have played it.
>>> This game is so popular that almost all of the people who played Dungeon and Fighter have played it.Because of this reason I would like to create the game which is motivated at the game made it before.
>>> Because of this reason I would like to create a game which is motivated by games made before.
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