My own essay

2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Oh, no... sorry :'( I will finish another essay after this right away. I can't get a normal thinking these days. I really hope this time will be gone soon <Essay> My dream house is really obvious because I somethimes imagined the house I will live in the future. In the mountain, a number of trees, in front of lake. My dream house is with the nature. If I earn lots of money, I want to build a villa like this.

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Hi there [이름]^^ Yes! Keep sending the essays and I will write back as soon as I could. You are very diligent. :) A lake house sound really nice and it\'s romantic! ^^ Maybe you can have that house with your future wife. hahahaha Good job here [이름]. Keep it up! Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Oh, no... sorry :\'( >> CORRECT OR> Gosh! I apologize.I will finish another essay after this right away. >> CORRECT OR> I will keep writing with the essays today.I can\'t get a normal thinking these days. >> CORRECT OR> I can\'t get to think properly these days.  I really hope this time will be gone soon >>  CORRECT OR> I hope this time passes fast.<Essay>My dream house is really obvious because I somethimes imagined the house I will live in the future. >> CORRECT OR> My dream house is clear on my mind since I spend a lot of time thinking about it. In the mountain, a number of trees, in front of lake. >> In the mountain with a number of trees, and  in front of a lake. My dream house is with the nature. >> CORRECT OR> I dream of a house in nature. If I earn lots of money, I want to build a villa like this. >> CORRECT OR> I will have a house like this when I have enough money.

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