My own essay
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh, no... sorry :'(
I will finish another essay after this right away.
I can't get a normal thinking these days. I really hope this time will be gone soon
<Essay>
My dream house is really obvious because I somethimes imagined the house I will live in the future. In the mountain, a number of trees, in front of lake. My dream house is with the nature. If I earn lots of money, I want to build a villa like this.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Yes! Keep sending the essays and I will write back as soon as I could.
You are very diligent. :)
A lake house sound really nice and it\'s romantic! ^^
Maybe you can have that house with your future wife. hahahaha
Good job here [이름]. Keep it up!
Take care^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Oh, no... sorry :\'(
>> CORRECT
OR> Gosh! I apologize.I will finish another essay after this right away.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will keep writing with the essays today.I can\'t get a normal thinking these days.
>> CORRECT
OR> I can\'t get to think properly these days.
I really hope this time will be gone soon
>> CORRECT
OR> I hope this time passes fast.<Essay>My dream house is really obvious because I somethimes imagined the house I will live in the future.
>> CORRECT
OR> My dream house is clear on my mind since I spend a lot of time thinking about it.
In the mountain, a number of trees, in front of lake.
>> In the mountain with a number of trees, and in front of a lake.
My dream house is with the nature.
>> CORRECT
OR> I dream of a house in nature.
If I earn lots of money, I want to build a villa like this.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will have a house like this when I have enough money.
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