My own way to recover

2023-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I tend to handle challenges by frequently communicating with my friends. However, It is important to suggest effective solutions or rational evidence rather than emotional encouragement. When I had considered career move due to demanding work intensity, Spending time with friends were truly helpful to recover. I also usually relieve my stress by enjoying spicy foods and going to bed early.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

You are one step closer to your goals!

-Hanna ^^

I tend to handle challenges by frequently communicating with my friends.

>>Correct.
However, It is important to suggest effective solutions or rational evidence rather than emotional encouragement.

>>Correct.
When I had considered career move due to demanding work intensity, Spending time with friends were truly helpful to recover.

>>When I contemplated a career move due to demanding work intensity, spending time with friends proved to be truly helpful in the recovery process.

I also usually relieve my stress by enjoying spicy foods and going to bed early.

>>Additionally, I often find stress relief in enjoying spicy foods and ensuring an early bedtime.

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