My own way to relieve stress
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Actually, there are a lot of effective ways to relieve stress. In my case, whenever i feel anxious, i try to do breathing exercise like meditation. But practically, it is not useful. Because it is difficult to have a meditation when other people are talking. So i just try to keep on finding the best way in real-time
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It is good that you are not giving up on discovering more about yourself, [이름]! You managed to answer the question fairly.-Faith-
Actually, there are a lot of effective ways to relieve stress. >> CORRECT
In my case, whenever i feel anxious, i try to do breathing exercise like meditation.
>> In my case, whenever I feel anxious, I try to do breathing exercises like meditation.
But practically, it is not useful. Because it is difficult to have a meditation when other people are talking.
>> However, practically, it is not useful because it is difficult to have a meditation when other people are talking.
So i just try to keep on finding the best way in real-time
>> Therefore, I just try to keep on finding the best way in real time.
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