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The machine has been applied the digital restoration and safety diagnosis of cultural heritages by Zhou et al.(2008). Also, software for data processing was used Cyclone and AutoCAD programs. The reason why many programs were used for the data processing is insufficient to complete the three-dimensional shape by a singular program. And then, the data processing using the programs was carried out as following orders; registering, polygon mesh, drawing. Completed digital image of the stone pagoda were used to analyze the quantitative displacement of the pagoda. Figure 1 shows four tilmeter sensors installed to the basement and the fifth story of the stone pagoda. Each tiltmeter sensor was attached with considering aesthetic value of the stone pagoda and functional characteristics of the sensors. Also, to examine the relation between behavioral characteristics and climate factors, it was collected temperature, humidity, insolation and wind speed data during the same period.

Hello there! Wow! Your sentences are amazing! You are doing great with your grammar. Keep it up! :) I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. Take care always and talk to you in class! :) T. Jane The machine has been applied the digital restoration and safety diagnosis of cultural heritages by Zhou et al.(2008). >>The machine has been applied for the digital restoration and safety diagnosis of cultural heritages by Zhou et al. (2008) Also, software for data processing was used Cyclone and AutoCAD programs. >>Also, the software for data processing was used in Cyclone and AutoCAD programs. The reason why many programs were used for the data processing is insufficient to complete the three-dimensional shape by a singular program. >>DID YOU MEAN: The reason why there are many programs that was used for data processing because it is insufficient to complete the three-dimensional shape by a single program. And then, the data processing using the programs was carried out as following orders; registering, polygon mesh, drawing. >>And then, the data processing, using the programs, was carried out following this order: registering, polygon mesh and drawing. Completed digital image of the stone pagoda were used to analyze the quantitative displacement of the pagoda. >>Completed digital image of the stone pagoda was used to analyze the quantitative displacement of the pagoda.Figure 1 shows four tilmeter sensors installed to the basement and the fifth story of the stone pagoda. >>Correct! Each tiltmeter sensor was attached with considering aesthetic value of the stone pagoda and functional characteristics of the sensors. >>Each tilmeter sensor was attached considering the aesthetic value of the stone pagoda and functional characteristics of the sensors. Also, to examine the relation between behavioral characteristics and climate factors, it was collected temperature, humidity, insolation and wind speed data during the same period. >>To examine also the relation between behavioral characteristics and climate factors, it collexted temperature, humidity, insolation and wind speed data during the same period.