My parent\'s advice
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I remember my father\'s advice vividly. When I lost an important race and was disappointed at the fact that next morning I faced my friends and teachers, my dad came over to me and consoled me saying that over time I am going to face many successes and failures at the same time. He said that this failure would make you have the power to deal with some failures. At that time I was a senior of high school. Decades of years have passed,but I have kept my father\'s advice deep in mind. So I am not afraid of failing or missing anything.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
The advice that you received from your father was really great and motivating. It\'s nice that he made you understand at a young age that failure is a part of life and that each failure can make you stronger as a person. Thank you for sharing it with me!
- T. Caitlyn
I remember my father\'s advice vividly.
>> CORRECT
When I lost an important race and was disappointed at the fact that next morning I faced my friends and teachers, my dad came over to me and consoled me saying that over time I am going to face many successes and failures at the same time.
>> When I lost an important race and felt disappointed at the fact that the next morning, I had to face my friends and teachers, my dad came over to me and consoled me, saying that over time I would experience both successes and failures.
He said that this failure would make you have the power to deal with some failures.
>> He said that this failure would give me the strength to deal with future failures.
At that time I was a senior of high school.
>> At that time, I was a senior in high school.
Decades of years have passed,but I have kept my father\'s advice deep in mind.
>> CORRECT
So I am not afraid of failing or missing anything.
>> CORRECT
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