My parents
학생이 쓴 원문
The people I respect the most are my parents.
Sadly, however, my parents passed away a long time ago.
In my parents lifetime,
I got a lot of love from them.
And they respected each other and never saw them fight.
That\'s why I don\'t like to fight and hate it.
Rina~
Thank you for your teaching^^♡
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
You were able to make good sentences. Keep it up! ^^
- T. Rina^^
1. The people I respect the most are my parents.
>> CORRECT!
2. Sadly, however, my parents passed away a long time ago.
>> CORRECT!
3. In my parents lifetime, I got a lot of love from them.
>> CORRECT!
4. And they respected each other and never saw them fight.
>> They respected each other and I never saw them fight.
5. That\'s why I don\'t like to fight and hate it.
>> That\'s why I don\'t like to fight because I hate it.
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