My past memories are vanished.

2019-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I did a lot bad behaviors during my past times. But I forgot it all. Today I did some study about Korean history. I did nothing only except study. Time passes like arrow. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I did a lot bad behaviors during my past times.
>> I used to have bad behaviors.

But I forgot it all.
>> Gladly, I forgot them all.

Today I did some study about Korean history.
>> I studied Korean history today.

I did nothing only except study.
>> I did nothing except studying.

Time passes like arrow.
>> Time passes like an arrow.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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