My pastime activities in holidays

During holidays , I usually watch TV , surf the internet or play computer games. I spend a lot of time watching movies. When I want to see a movie , I just log on to the internet site to download it. As soon as finishing a downloaing , I watch it lying on the bed. Whenever I get bored in watching movies, I just go in front of my computer and surf the internet Reading a news is also a great holiday pastime for me. after reading a news , I usually play computer games. My favorite game is soccer game. I also love to play the guitar so I set apart some of my time playing the guitar. All activities I've just mentioned really help me to get rid of the stress I got during the week.

Hi [이름].Thank God it's Friday.Well we will have few days to be free from all the stress we had for this week.You may go out with your friend downtown as waht you tols me before.Have fun [이름].Well I thought that you have an excellent writing skills.Please continue doing so.Have a safe weekend at work..kkk   LINA   During holidays , I usually watch TV , surf the internet or play computer games. >>CorrectI spend a lot of time watching movies.>>CorrectWhen I want to see a movie, I just log on to the internet site to download it.>>CorrectAs soon as finishing a downloaing , >>As soon as I finished downloading. I watch it lying on the bed.>>I watch it while lying down on bed.Whenever I get bored in watching movies, I just go in front of my computer and surf the internet>>CorrectReading a news is also a great holiday pastime for me. >> Reading news is a great holiday pastime for me also. after reading a news , I usually play computer games. >>After reading news, I usually play computer gamesMy favorite game is soccer game. >>My favorite game is soccer.I also love to play the guitar>>Correctso I set apart some of my time playing the guitar.>>Correct >>So I spend some of my time playing the guitarAll activities I've just mentioned really help me to get rid of the stress I got during the week. >>Correct